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Vilnius Castle Complex

Article is already GA, recently it was expanded with new section. I would like to make this article an FA in upcoming future. So, I need an evaluation of this article before going on WP:FAC. M.K. 19:52, 25 January 2007 (UTC)

Quick glance shows that there are some unreferenced paragraphs.-- _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus | talk}  13:58, 15 February 2007 (UTC)

Could you please, be more specific which one and which parts should be with refs? M.K. 15:54, 15 February 2007 (UTC)

It's quite simple, really: look at the article and count paragraphs that don't have any references. Starting with At the time of the attack in 1390... I count 12, plus several other places in the article where citations should be added (usually paras with a ref in the middle, and no ref for the following sentences). Check Jogaila for a proper density of references that we now expect.-- _{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus | talk}  17:14, 17 February 2007 (UTC)

• Not bad at all, lots of interesting information. Assorted comments:
  • Piotrus's statement may be a bit strong, Jogaila is quite dense with references, I would not aim that high for a not particularly controversial article, but he does have a point that more could be cited.
  • "The Castle Complex has been inhabited since Neolithic times." Wow, the world's oldest castle! :-) Rephrase so it doesn't imply there was such a thing at that time, or just strike since the higher section says the same thing better.
  • "13–14th centuries" link both or neither.
  • "the invasion of the Russians in 1655" don't link Russians, link to an article about the invasion
  • "Recently the Seimas, Lithuania's Parliament, passed a law" - surely this can be cited to a news article; and what is "recently"? - give a date.
  • "Atop the tower, on January 1, 1919, the Lithuanian tricolor was hoisted for the first time." - reorder -> The Lithuanian tricolor was hoisted for the first time on this tower, on January 1, 1919. Also can you link to/write a Flag Day article?
  • "the site was bowered." - what does that mean? wikilink or explain.
  • "After the Russian invasion in 1655, the state began weakening, and that negatively affected the Royal Palace." - awkward, rephrase. --AnonEMouse ^(squeak) 21:07, 22 February 2007 (UTC)