Wikipedia:Peer review/Venues of the 2016 Summer Olympics/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to nominate it for FLC.
Regards, Felipe Menegaz 00:19, 5 December 2009 (UTC)
- Comments by Parutakupiu (talk)
Lead:
"will be an international multi-sport event to be held in Rio de Janeiro..." – Unlink "international" and remove "to be";
Choose between "pre-exisiting" or "existing", when referring to the venue status;
Why are golf and rubgy sevens frequently capitalized?
Any developments on the IGF decision concerning the golf venue?
"Rio de Janeiro is planning to hold all the competitions inside the city..." – Rio de Janeiro or ROCOG?
- Both. Felipe Menegaz 15:59, 7 December 2009 (UTC)
- But ROCOG already includes city officials, no? In my opinion ROCOG suits better, but I won't make a fuss over it.
"...officialy known as Jornalista Mário Filho Stadium..." – Forgot an "l" in "officially";
General:
I don't see the need to explicit in every section title that they are competition venues, unless you also have sections for non-competition venues, which you don't;
- Based on List of 2008 Summer Olympics venues. Felipe Menegaz 15:59, 7 December 2009 (UTC)
- OK, but I think that the Beijing page should have that dealt with in some way, as well. Actually, I don't know why there aren't any mentions to the non-competition venues, such as the Olympic Village, MPC and IBC in these pages...
- Working on it. Felipe Menegaz 22:30, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
- OK, but I think that the Beijing page should have that dealt with in some way, as well. Actually, I don't know why there aren't any mentions to the non-competition venues, such as the Olympic Village, MPC and IBC in these pages...
Many of the Olympic venues were already used for the 2007 Pan Ams, so you should add some adequately licensed images of those.If you do, don't forget to add a proper alt text;
- What about add pictures (some non-free) to the tables? Felipe Menegaz 16:16, 7 December 2009 (UTC)
- Fine by me, provided the tables are kept simple and their layout isn't majorly disrupted. Parutakupiu (talk) 00:57, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
- Done. Felipe Menegaz 22:30, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
- Remove that "Pic." header and place the image column under the "Venue" header. It's a pity that they appear so small... If you didn't add images for all venues, then you could place those images outside the tables, but I prefer to have pics if they are available. We gotta find a way of having them all, but bigger. I will think of something. Parutakupiu (talk) 22:51, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
- I was thinking to add lots of iformation such as coordinates, building cost, constructions years, location (Olympic zone), etc. We gotta find a way of having them all... Felipe Menegaz 02:38, 9 December 2009 (UTC)
- Remove that "Pic." header and place the image column under the "Venue" header. It's a pity that they appear so small... If you didn't add images for all venues, then you could place those images outside the tables, but I prefer to have pics if they are available. We gotta find a way of having them all, but bigger. I will think of something. Parutakupiu (talk) 22:51, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
- Done. Felipe Menegaz 22:30, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
- Fine by me, provided the tables are kept simple and their layout isn't majorly disrupted. Parutakupiu (talk) 00:57, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
- There are plenty of redirects and some of them should be fixed.
- Working on it. Felipe Menegaz 01:33, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
Red links:
- There are several red links in this page. Are you planning to create articles for each one of the red links?
Notes:
- There is a typo in the Notes section: 'Although the official opening of the games is scheduled to be on August 5, 2016, football matchs will begin on August 3" – Forgot an "E" in "matches";
Competition venues:
- Are you planning to add images to all the competition venues (the following sections lack images, at the moment: Existing competition venues, Temporary competition venues and Competition venues outside Rio de Janeiro)?
- Yes. I stopped because I was thinking in adding the non-free images to the existing venues. These venues will be renovated and would be interesting to use the non-free images to show how they will look like in 2016. Felipe Menegaz 22:28, 8 December 2009 (UTC)