Wikipedia:Peer review/University of Canterbury Faculty of Law/archive1

University of Canterbury Faculty of Law

I've listed this article for peer review because I want it double checked.

Thanks, MitchellMatchbox (talk) 21:31, 4 September 2024 (UTC)

Airship

A double check has arrived. This'll be a fairly general review.

• In general, a few too many section headers. I would remove all the subsection headers from "Academic Profile" and "Organisations and publications", and the "notable alumni" subsection header too.

• • Note that only the first word of section headers should be capitalised.

• For the "notable people" section, note that faculty members are usually counted as alumni for the purpose of lists. If you cite specific faculty members, they will need citations; at the moment, most are uncited. The same goes for the list of Deans.

• • I would suggest prosifying most of the section and removing any headers, and instead having three paragraphs: "Notable students include ...", "Notable faculty members include...", "The list of deans are..."

• The lead should certainly be expanded. Note that MOS:LEAD advises that it summarise the whole article. At present, very little is summarised.

• Sourcing seems generally good, but less primary and more secondary sourcing would always be useful.

Feel free to ping me if you have any questions. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 23:57, 31 October 2024 (UTC)