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Today (song)

This is an article that I've been working on considerably recently. It is currently a Good Article and I would like it to eventually be featured. What needs improvement? --Brandt Luke Zorn 20:12, 21 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

After the release and minor success of the band's debut, Gish - add album after debut so we know it's an album.
Billy Corgan recalled that - second time you mention him so only use Corgan, as for the rest of the times you mention his full name
link Writer's block i had no idea what it was until i searched it
Butch Vig, and the band and received a positive reaction. This seems a bit awkward with two ands so close
Credits section is pretty much redundant as you mention who does what in song history and people may object because of a redundant list.
Ref 15 needs clean-up

M3tal H3ad 08:36, 1 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 02:22, 6 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]