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The Fray (band)

I've worked on this article quite a bit since I came across it [1]. I'm hoping the bring this page up at least to GA status, but I've never been an expert at prose. Keep in mind that information on the band is pretty limited, since their first album only came out less than a year ago. I appreciate the help! Teemu08 20:53, 22 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry to keep you waiting so long. I read over the article and made some minor copyedits, but I think it's good enough to nominate for a GA. The only sentence that bothers me is: "For the next twelve weeks, the song was ranked higher than the week before, and two weeks later it reached its peak position at #8 on the Hot 100 chart." It makes sense, sort of, but it's horrible grammar, and I wasn't sure how to correct it. Anyway, good luck with the GA nomination! Eilicea 14:54, 19 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the comments and the copy-edit. I re-wrote that sentence so that it didn't sound so awkward. Teemu08 21:00, 19 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]