Wikipedia:Peer review/Telecommunication/archive1
This article introduces the subject of telecommunication from a technical perspective, it is a relatively long article (40 kB) and has been identified as one of the core topics for Wikipedia. It has been recently rewritten over the course of several months. I welcome any suggestions on how to improve the article. I hope to at least make it a good article. Cedars 02:18, 2 August 2006 (UTC)
- It looks pretty good, the lead could use work since the majority of the second paragraph is a self reference, where it should be a summary of the article. While the rest of the article is pretty well balanced, there is a skew towards new technology - I think it could use some sort of analysis on access to telecommuniccations and how that varies across the world.--Peta 04:32, 2 August 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks Peta! I removed the self references and added some discussion about differing levels of access to telecommunication worldwide. Cedars 07:01, 3 August 2006 (UTC)
- Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 01:33, 9 August 2006 (UTC)