Wikipedia:Peer review/Technological singularity/archive1
A very interesting theory in the future studies. Something that may change greatly our world. I think this article is quite comprehensive, well written and has pretty pictures (graphs). Do you think it is ready for FAC? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 11:06, 6 August 2005 (UTC)
- In the "likelihood and possibility" criticism section, three writers with different arguments are loosely mentioned without actually presenting what their arguments might be. This paragraph serves no purpose as is. Generally, this subsection could use expansion. The article could also use some more careful organization; e.g. Singularity Technologies and Desirability and Safety appear to overlap somewhat. Christopher Parham (talk) 05:04, 2005 August 7 (UTC)