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Syriac Orthodox Church

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I've listed this article for peer review because it was long since last review, need to know what can be improved to make it a GA. Thanks, J.Stalin S ^Talk 04:06, 6 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

Comments after a quick skim:

"Severians continued to recognize Severus as the legitimate miaphysite Patriarch of Antioch until his death in 538, and then proceeded to follow his successors." Needs a citation
"The Emir demanded translations of the Gospels into Arabic to confirm John's beliefs, which according to the Chronicle of Michael the Syrian was the first translation of the Gospels into Arabic." Needs a citation
"Transfer to new locations" Why is this heading bolded instead of a level 4 heading?
The "Transfer to new locations" has a citation after 1160, but not at the end of the paragraph. Does this citation verify all of the information here? If so, I recommend that it be placed at the end of the paragraph.
Instead of using bolded titles, use level 4 headings.
"Also in the late 1800s, the reformation faction of the Saint Thomas Christians in India left to form the Mar Thoma Syrian Church." Needs a citation.
"In the early 1920s, the city of Qamishli was built mainly by Syriac Orthodox refugees, escaping the Syriac genocide." needs a citation.
"Maphrian or Catholicos of India" section needs a citation.
"A bishop is a spiritual ruler of the church who has different ranks. Then there are metropolitan bishops or archbishops, and under them, there are auxiliary bishops." Needs a citation.
Priests section needs citations.
"Deacons" section needs more citations.
Every paragraph needs a citation at the end of it to verify the information. I found lots more passages that need citations.
There are lots of sources listed in "Bibliography" that are not used as inline citations in the article. Ensure that if a source is listed here that it is used in the article.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 00:25, 20 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]