Wikipedia:Peer review/Snow leopard/archive1
I really want to make this a featured article, so please tell me what I need to do. Daniel10 15:09, 28 December 2006 (UTC)
- This article is well on the way. It needs two or possibly three paragraphs in the lead which should summarise the important points and be expanded upon later in the article. In this article I'd move the history of its changing genus back and forth between Panthera and Uncia into the main article somewhere as it doesn't really belong in the startoff bit. So I'd put in a heading Classification somewhere down the article and put it there. Habitat and distribution need to be expanded, also there could be more on behaviour - how long do they live? how many cubs do they have? If the information is unknown then list it as unknown (by science in general that is). Also make sure material is in the correct place - I generally make a Heading Behaviour and have subeahdings like diet within it. I am not sure the list of conservation events should be there near the end of the article, but I don't have a strong opinion on it one way or the other. Finally, many articles on animals have more references. There may not be many more useful ones but if I were nominating this as an FA then I'd want more (I'm feeling slightly anxious at only having 43 with Diplodocus cheers Cas Liber 20:43, 28 December 2006 (UTC)
- PS: Forgot to add that this - Wikipedia:What is a featured article? - may be helpful.Cas Liber 20:46, 28 December 2006 (UTC)