Wikipedia:Peer review/Smiling Friends/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to improve it to GA status.
Thanks, lunaeclipse (talk) 20:19, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
Comment from Z1720
[edit]Comments after a quick skim:
- Suggest merging the first and second paragraph of the lede.
- The lede focuses too much on the release of the first season. I would delete most of that information and add information about the development of the series.
- Merge the single-sentence paragraphs in the "Production" and "Broadcast" sections with other paragraphs.
- Expand the "Home media" section or merge it with "Broadcast"
- The reception section needs to be expanded. Include the Metacritic rating, if possible. Additional sources can be found using Metacritic and search engines.
- In reception, avoid the "X says Y" pattern. WP:RECEPTION has ideas on how to do this.
I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 16:43, 20 June 2024 (UTC)