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Singapore 2006's previous GA nomination failed on 18 January 2007. I would appreciate any suggestions for improving the article so that a second GA nomination will be successful. --J.L.W.S. The Special One 13:54, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
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[edit]The following suggestions were partly generated by a semi-automatic javascript program.
- Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 8 metre, use 8 metre, which when you are editing the page, should look like:8 metre
.[?] - The table of contents (ToC) may be too long - consider shrinking it down by merging short sections.
- There are weasel words in this article - please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view:
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan 07:53, 9 August 2007 (UTC)