Wikipedia:Peer review/Siddha Yoga/archive1

Siddha Yoga

I think that this is a decent article that is somewhere between a start and a B class article. I would like to see it get to good article status. I think that it could benefit greatly from the insights of fellow editors. Thanks. TheRingess (talk) 01:38, 17 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Bcasterline

The vast majority of the article is in list form, which is generally considered infirior to prose. I'd say start there. Explain the practices in greater detail, explain the causes/effects of historical events, explain the holy days, etc. -- bcasterline • talk 05:31, 17 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the suggestions. TheRingess (talk) 06:10, 17 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Mailer Diablo

Length of article is a major concern - I think the bulleted points under 'Practices' can be expanded into prose. Citation of sources should be in a consistent format for the references section. - Mailer Diablo 11:47, 18 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks.TheRingess (talk) 15:38, 18 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]