Wikipedia:Peer review/Shiv Chopra/archive1
I just want an honest opinion on the writing and all on this article because I would like to bring it to the Good Article Status sometime. (Samir contributed more than me on this article although. --Deenoe 15:37, 28 August 2006 (UTC)
The article is well-written and well-citated. The problem is that it does not constitute a thorough biography, but focuses on two particular incidents: the whistleblowing and the racial discrimination. But I'll treat this article like all the other biographies:
- Photos are needed. I donot think it would be difficult to find photos related to this article.
- When was Chopra born? Very few words about her origins and family are needed.
- What are her whereabouts now? This is a biography for a living person; we want to know what she is now doing.
- If you expand the article with this information, the lead will also need a slight expansion (WP:LEAD).
- The link of East Indian sends me to a disambiguation page. This is wrong. Send me straight wherever you want, because in the disambiguation page I have more than ten links and I do not know which one you want me to choose.
In any case, I believe that the article is not far away from the GA status.--Yannismarou 06:40, 29 August 2006 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for your comments. For the picture, I am currently in discussino with Shiv Chopra to have a picture that is free of use completly. When I'll talk to him, I'll ask him about his origins and his whereabouts now, even if I think that currently Shiv Chopra is still in a battle with the public service. I'll also correct the fact that the link gets on a disambiguation page.
- Thanks again.--Deenoe 10:32, 29 August 2006 (UTC)