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Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band

• A superb article, in my opinion. Is there anything stopping this article from becoming Featured? TheImpossibleMan 11:30, 31 March 2006 (UTC)
  • The first thing I always look for is inline citation, which is lacking in this article. The References section at the end is half the battle, but WP:WIAFA encourages inline citation as well. --JerryOrr 20:02, 31 March 2006 (UTC)
  • Being a Beatles fan myself, I have read most of the facts in this article, and know that most of them are true. However, with no sources, no footnotes, and no apparent references, this doesn't stand a change of passing FAC. Other little things:
    • I'm not sure if A Day In The Life deserves its own subsection of the article, as great a song as it is. If it does deserve a subsection, it probably shouldn't be under the heading "Historical relevance."
    • Release History and Recording Details should either be significantly cut down, removed from the article, or subbed out. Likewise with the chart performances and Grammy nominations. If they're significant, work them into the main body of the text.
    • I'm not sure if the stunning album cover belongs under the heading "Technical Innovation."

Best of luck with this article, I'll be keeping my eye on it! The Disco King 03:46, 4 April 2006 (UTC)