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Hello there. I have listed this article for a peer review because I have the goal of getting the article to GA status. I'm just wondering how much work this needs for that to be achievable. Thank you, XR228 (talk) 04:36, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Comments from Z1720
[edit]- "The Kraken finished their inaugural season in last place of the Pacific Division with a 27–49–6 record and 60 points." Needs a citation.
- "Individual records" Needs a citation.
- Suggest splitting the pre-2021 season information from "First seasons (2021–present)" into its own section, as this section will continue to get longer with each new season, and is already quite long.
I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 02:17, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- I made the changes. I will say, for the season section changes, I split the "Early seasons" section into "Start of operations and inaugural season," similar to what is there on the Vegas Golden Knights article, as well as a section titled "Continued team development." I am doubting whether this can just stay as "Early seasons."
- I am also wondering about the prose size, as other teams' articles don't go too in depth about individual games.
- Nevertheless, thanks! XR228 (talk) 04:05, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
- I will be closing this review due to inactivity. I think it fits the Good Article criteria. XR228 (talk) 04:04, 29 May 2024 (UTC)