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San Marino Calcio

I've listed this article for peer review because i want to raise its quality

Thanks,

Sunderland06 12:14, 3 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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Angelo

There's really a load of work to do here. It's better first for you to expand this article as much as possible, following what the Manual of Style for football club articles suggests, and then asking for another peer review once you made it all. A prosed history section is probably one urgent things to do, together with an improvement in number of sources, whereas it is better if you remove the "notable players" list (why exactly these players and not others?).--Angelo 13:43, 14 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I have added why the players are notable, if you do not think that they are notable please delete them.--Sunderland06 (talk) 16:04, 24 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)

Well, some comments.

Y done "later to its current appellation." - odd wording, and if it was renamed again then it should be cited.
Y done Try, if possible, to place citations immediately after punctuation.
Y done Date ranges should use en-dash.
"... was later purchased by Sanmarinese and Italian entrepreneurs." needs citation.
"San Marino Calcio is the only Sanmarinese team allowed to participate exclusively at the professional level in the Italian football league, though another team, A.C. Juvenes/Dogana, competes in the amateur levels." needs citation.
Y done History section needs expansion. Even though it's only been around since 1960, provide a summary of how they've got on in the past 47 seasons.
Y done In Club colours section, no need to continually repeat [4] for every sentence, it's sufficient to use it at the end of the paragraph.
There's no history behind the colours section - why play in those colours?
"The sponsor of San Marino Calcio is Alfa Lum, also the sponsor of the Coppa Italia." citation needed.
Y yes Is current squad still correct (as of 8 December)?
Y done Cut the management section down a lot - mostly trivial positions in a club whose manager doesn't even have an article.
Y done some, working on it Notable players. Notable how? Check other football Featured articles for how this is best dealt with. A fork to a comprehensive list of players who meet a defined set of criteria (e.g. minimum number of appearances, club record holders, international players while at the club) is what I'd recommend. At the moment, this list is purely subjective.
Overall it's a little on the light side. Adding more sources and references and expanding each section would make for a better article. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:40, 8 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]