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SAI Global

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I've listed this article for peer review because the company has undergone _significant_ change since the then-current Wikipedia entry. To avoid potential whole-page reversion, I've pasted in proposed changes to the talk page. Please review and comment.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/SAI_Global https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:SAI_Global

Thank you! Kainleb (talk) 19:51, 12 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from KJP1

I suspect you want comments on your proposed revision, rather than on the article as it stands. I'm not sure as to the etiquette of peer-reviewing a proposed draft, but some observations below:

The draft's completely unsourced which is an absolute no-no.
I'm not seeing anything that suggests the company is Notable, as per Wikipedia:Notability (organizations and companies).
It's way too detailed, mini biographies of board members, long History list, etc.
It's promotional throughout and reads like a company brochure.
To me, your editing has all the hallmarks of an undeclared Conflict of interest. I see it's the only article you've worked on. Do you have a connection to the company? If so, this needs to be declared and you need to follow our guidance on COI editing.

All in all, I'd have serious concerns about accepting your revision wholesale. KJP1 (talk) 10:02, 3 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]