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Rani Mukerji

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I've listed this article for peer review because Rani Mukerji is one of the most accomplished leading actors in India (Hindi cinema), and should thus have a decent Wikipedia article. This page had earlier gone through a peer review, but since then, a lot of positive changes have been made.

Thanks, smaro! 11:06, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

First off, has everything from the previous review been fixed? See here and here. BollyJeff || talk 13:08, 2 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, all of them have been fixed. smaro! 13:39, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

Intro - says 12 FF nominations, but filmography shows 14. Sources needed to reconcile/verify.
Intro - says she re-invented herself twice. Really?
Intro - only mentions film career. Maybe a little less of that, and summarize whole article.
Early life - seems a little light on sources.
Early work - source for special jury recognition?
Film career section is very well filled out, but more needed in other work and personal life areas.
File:Laaga Chunari Mein Daagsisters.jpg not needed. There are a lot of pictures, and this one is probably not free.
I will rearrange some text to avoid having a small Controversies section.
Overall pretty good, but not quite GA yet due to lack of full coverage outside of films. BollyJeff || talk 13:34, 4 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the suggestions. I have corrected a few things. The image of LCMD is a free one. Honestly, there isn't much off-screen work to talk about. So I don't know what other information I can add. The only thing I am working on is to include her religious involvement. Other than that, I don't see any other significant topics regarding her personal life. smaro! 15:23, 4 January 2012 (UTC)

Also, the number of Filmfare nominations that she has received are 12. The 2 Critics awards that she won don't have additional nominations. smaro! 15:34, 4 January 2012 (UTC)

I see, thanks. Keep looking for more info, after all this is a biographical article, it needs more. BollyJeff || talk 15:54, 4 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lots of dead links (many from Bollywood Hungama) - it will never pass with all of these. BollyJeff || talk 15:52, 5 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Removed all the dead links. Updated to new and better links. smaro! 12:31, 6 January 2012 (UTC)