Wikipedia:Peer review/Randall Flagg/archive2
I've been working pretty hard on this lately, expanding and reworking sections, including extra sources and quotes and etceteras. I'd like for it to become either a Good or Featured article, so any help or recommendations would be greatly appreciated.--CyberGhostface 16:53, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
Wow
[edit]Wow, it's been a while since I looked at the Randall Flagg page, and I'm impressed with the progression that has been made with it. I really don't have many criticisms, except that I don't really understand the relationtionship between Flagg and Farson. Was it simply an error on King's part? Other than that, great job, man. Kevin (TALK)(MUSIC) 18:57, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks! As for Farson...yes, I think it was an error or oversight on King's part, or at least something that was not explained enough. Originally he was the rebel that overthrew Gilead, and Flagg worked for him. King got a bit sloppy when he revised the gunslinger and then finished the rest of the series, because he said he was Farson in the revised and then went back to his normal status in the final novel. I'll see if I can clarify it a little, though.--CyberGhostface 20:02, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
Nice
[edit]It's looks all cleaned up and reads a lot clearer than I remember. I think this article's at the stage it needs to be now. (Unless King writes Flagg into another book, that is).Artemisstrong (talk) 21:43, 23 November 2007 (UTC)
- Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 00:53, 26 October 2007 (UTC)