Wikipedia:Peer review/Pokémon Red and Blue/archive1
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I am trying to get this article to featured status, so I am requesting a peer review to try and iron out most of the obvious issue. Any comments, suggestions, and help would be greatly appreciated. Thanks, Artichoker[talk] 23:26, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
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Comments from SriMesh | talk 04:15, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- handheld--> hand held or provide wikilink for term or an inline citation as it is not a dictionary word.
- provide wikilink Multiplayer video game for multiplayer
- Is run-throughs a word? Perhaps sentence could be re-worded.
- Run-throughs is used in a quote, so I can't change it or wiki-link it.
- The very fist time IGN is mentioned it should be spelled out...Imagine Games Network (IGN) wikilinked and then parenthesized so folks no what the heck an IGN actually is.
- IGN is already wiki-linked, and is also the title of the Wikipedia article. And as far as I know, no other video games spell out the company.
- As there is no wikilink for the made up non dictionary term...Pokemoniversary
.. there should be an inline citation to a Pokemoniversary source.
- Pokémoniversary is already cited at the end of the full quote by George Harrison (cite number 32.)
- good job for using Non-free use media rationale for Pokémon Red and Blue on the image pages for this article.
- good job separating out sub articles so this article is not too long.
Kind Regards and good luck
- I have addressed the rest of your concerns. Thank you, Artichoker[talk] 15:25, 21 September 2008 (UTC)