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Pilot (House episode)

I was thinking submitting this article for featured article status after dealing with the Star Wars articles for so long. I'm doing this to do something smaller, but I'm also doing something different that not nobody had done before. I'm here asking for help in any ideas for bettering the article before I submit for FAC. The Filmaker 16:30, 11 September 2006 (UTC)

• The synopsis needs some tweaking for better flow and style and should be only slightly trimmed for length. I don't watch House and can only assume Other clinic paitents is a staple of the show. However, I do not think its needed. Synopsis should be qucik and to the point, secondary stories generally shouldn't be mentioned. Also, after a character is mentioned in the summary, in parenthesis include the actor's portraying the character name.
  • Behind the scenes should be before Reception since this is basically the Production section found in other media articles. If the information is avaiable (like in DVD commentary or Companion book) how the episode's concept came about should be mentioned. Since this is the pilot anymore information on how the shows creators tried to portray what the show would be like should be mentioned if the information is available. I also question the inclusion of the minor trivia of explaining Tuskegee and Megele.
  • If you really like Tuskegge and Megele though it would better fit in Medical terms which is mostly Trivia as well. I'm not sure if this section is encyclopedic at all, but if you do keep it the first sentence needs to be referenced. You should also include info on the ratings the episode recieved if possible. On a side note, I do believe a Television episode can be a FA and this is the closest episode article I've seen. Medvedenko 02:18, 12 September 2006 (UTC)