Wikipedia:Peer review/Philadelphia Sports Hall of Fame/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because…
Thanks, Flyguy33 (talk) 05:01, 28 September 2009 (UTC)
- Compare your list with Poker Hall of Fame which was recently featured.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 07:46, 28 September 2009 (UTC)
- You need expansion to encompass info about the criteria of induction, the history of the institution and any related info...--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 07:46, 28 September 2009 (UTC)
- You also need to give references to your table.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 07:46, 28 September 2009 (UTC)
Brianboulton comments:
- I concur with the above remarks. Whether this is a list or an article it needs a proper summary as its lead section, not a one-sentence intro.
- The details in the table need to be sourced.
- There are several Hall of Fame lists in the Sports section of WP:FL. You could get guidance from these, in particular:-
- Consider what images could be used. You will see that the above examples are copiously illustrated.