Wikipedia:Peer review/Percy Lavon Julian/archive1
Please help review the article for Black History Month
- It's a pretty decent article, but I have a few suggestions:
- I think commas would be helpful here: "...discovered that, upon hydrolysis, soy protein acted..." Just my opinion of course.
- casein could be linked.
- There's no mention of the difficulties Percy Julian experienced with his Mexico plant (in which he was heavily invested), or of the outcome of his struggles there.
- If possible I would like to see more about his work at Julian Laboratories.
- It would be good to see an estimate of the number of his scientific publications in journals and such.
- It's a minor issue, but there are a few spaces between punctuation and the citation links. It would look tighter if those were removed.
- Thanks. — RJH (talk) 20:02, 9 February 2007 (UTC)
- Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 21:47, 10 February 2007 (UTC)