Wikipedia:Peer review/Papua New Guinea/archive1

This article is almost good enough for a featured article, but with a few edits it can be almost perfect. taylorr 20:16, 24 July 2005 (UTC)[reply]

There are an awful lot of sections. The article seems splintered. Is there a way to get it to flow together more cohesively? --malathion ^talk 02:21, 25 July 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I agree with malathion about the sections, and I also feel that there are too many one sentence paragraphs. The article also probably has too much information. A general overview page should not contain statistics such as are in the geography and economy sections. A big problem is that almost all the images are unverified. They will need to be sourced or removed before the page can become a FA. - SimonP 02:38, July 25, 2005 (UTC)

Compress the article, its too long. Some of the sections are half-baked like the demographics and geography. A poor copy and paste done here. THe table headings are misused. There shouldn't be any sub headings for a country article. =Nichalp «Talk»= 19:06, July 25, 2005 (UTC)

Agree with all the above. It's too long, and really quite messy in parts. Bit too much random detail - for eg. in the Demography section - and too many sections and sub-sections. People have obviously been putting some effort in, but it needs to be snappier and more readable. I suggest a relatively short main article giving an overview, divided into major topics (History, Politics, Geography, etc), with links to more detailed articles on those topics. A possible model is the main article for Australia. -- 163.1.81.102 12:04, 14 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]