Wikipedia:Peer review/Opus Dei/archive2

Opus Dei

Previous PR is at Wikipedia:Peer review/Opus Dei/archive1.

I think the tone of this article needs to be improved, so I'm sending this to peer review. Otherwise the content isn't too bad IMO. - Ta bu shi da yu 08:44, 18 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

In the top section, the 2nd paragraph seems a bit long and contains a lot of info that should probably be contained below. I would trim it some. Briancua 18:55, 12 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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Thanks, Andy _t 23:30, 14 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]