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One Day All This Will End

I've listed this article for peer review because... I want to get this GA. please look for lacking things formatting errors any other gripes thanks

Thanks, Chchcheckit (talk) 09:23, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720

Comments after a quick skim:

• The "Critical reception" section falls into the "X says Y" pattern. WP:RECEPTION has some tips on how to avoid this.
• The lede is quite short, and doesn't contain any information about the background or recording process. Consider adding that in.

Overall, it looks like it's in good shape for a GAN. After fixing the above I suggest nominating it. Z1720 (talk) 23:59, 25 August 2023 (UTC)