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I just expanded this article from a stub and would like feedback, particularly from those who know about music and musicology. Does the article flow correctly? What needs to be done before it is ready for WP:FAC? Thanks, — BrianSmithson 08:43, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like:18 mm.[1] - Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
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- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
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- Copy edited the best I can. — BrianSmithson 06:04, 18 September 2006 (UTC)
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, BrianSmithson 05:35, 18 September 2006 (UTC)