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Northeastern United States tornado outbreak of 1989

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Believe I have done all I can, need a second set of eyes to do a copyedit, and any other comments would be appreciated. -RunningOnBrains 04:15, 4 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Still seeking comments, please. -RunningOnBrains 14:56, 17 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah, I'm not that experienced an editor, but here are some thoughts:
  • It would be nice if the Template:Tornado chart template (or the area around it) would somehow link to the Fujita scale article in an intuitive way.
  • There are some length measurements (e.g. size of hail) that are given in English units with no SI equivalents.
  • The last paragraph (second paragraph of "Historic outbreak") section is worded a little awkwardly -- e.g. repetition of phrase "this area of the world".
Aside from those minor nitpicks, though, it looks great to me! --Iknowyourider (t c) 19:04, 17 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
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