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NPA personality theory

This article is being submitted for peer review on the suggestion of one of the editors, who thought it might be eventually suitable for submission as a featured article -- especially as very few articles in Psychology are so submitted. Any advice as to general further improvements would be appreciated. Many thanks. ABenis 15:29, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

In-line citations are needed. --Osbus 21:35, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. Will work on it. ABenis 01:39, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

First off, the article should be moved to NPA personality theory.

Will do. ABenis 01:39, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please incorporate "Historical note" into the rest of the article somewhere.

Done. ABenis 01:39, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at WP:GTL.
This article needs footnotes, preferably in the cite.php format recommended by WP:WIAFA. Simply, enclose inline citations, with WP:CITE or WP:CITE/ES information, with <ref>THE FOOTNOTE</ref>. At the bottom of the article, in a section named “References” or “Footnotes”, add <div class="references-small"><references/></div>.

Thanks. Will work in it. ABenis 01:39, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Images need proper image copyright tags and source information. Specifically, Image:Karen Horney.jpg need(s) proper image copyright tags.

The image was imported from Wikipédia/France to Commons with the same file name and copyright tag. Will see what the problem is. ABenis 01:39, 29 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

This article may be a bit list-weighty; in other words, some of the lists should be converted to prose (paragraph form).
Thanks, AndyZ _t 23:41, 28 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]