Wikipedia:Peer review/Munich/archive1

Munich

This is a very broad article. I would like to get a peer review to help improve to get it to GA status. I know it lack sources. What else can this article improve on? Kingjeff 19:59, 27 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

It has an over-whelming table of contents. Consider removing a some sub-headings, like "Setting", "Religion", "Sports clubs", "Olympic Park, Allianz Arena and Grünwalder Stadion", etc.
Avoid one-sentence paragraphs.
What does "city's sticky altitude" mean?
Provide a footnote for the information in "Demographics"
Use WP:SS with History of Munich and this article's "History"
In "Politics" tell us about the city's government (eg. mayor, local election, what the local gov does, etc.)
The "Houses of worship" and "The palaces, royal avenues and theatres" use a lot of space describing individual buildings, many of which have articles of their own. Avoid describing details of the buildings (let their own article do that) and concentrate on relating the group of buildings (of course you can mention them specifically) to the cityscape, skyline or architecture of the city in general.
"Famous people born in Munich" seems like trivia. --maclean 05:52, 29 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]