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Millwall F.C.–West Ham United F.C. rivalry

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I've contributed heavily to this article along with another user. We've been cleaning it up and adding the numerous references it was lacking. Require a fresh pair of eyes to help improve the lead and history sections especially. Working towards an eventual GA nom. BillyBatty (talk) 15:59, 22 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.^[?]
This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.^[?]
The script has spotted the following contractions: couldn't, Don't, haven't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.^[?]

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Millwall F.C.–West Ham United F.C. rivalry links to 1 redirect which point back.
- Millwall F.C. and West Ham United F.C. rivalry (redirect page)
  - Millwall F.C.–West Ham United F.C. rivalry

-(t) Josve05a (c) 23:46, 22 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]