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Mega Man Battle Network 5

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I've listed this article for peer review because there have been significant edits since its last edit nearly a year ago; in particular, the edits done were the ones listed on its to-do list (more development info, and removal of the uncited/unnecessary character section). Other minor edits mainly relate to adding more citations, and replacing outdated citation links (thanks, GameSpot).

Thanks, Shadowboxer2005 (talk) 06:13, 22 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

@Shadowboxer2005: I have taken a quick skim of the article, and here are some thoughts on how to improve it:

Every paragraph needs a citation at the end of it (except the Story section, per MOS:PLOT it doesn't need citations)
Move the reception template to the top of the reception section to save white space.
The reception section should state what reviewers liked about the game, and why they gave different scores to the GBA and DS versions.
Ref 20 title should not be in all caps per MOS:ALLCAPS

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 23:11, 2 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Shadowboxer2005: to ensure that they saw the above comments. Z1720 (talk) 17:50, 25 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I did see it; I was just working on other things. Shadowboxer2005 (talk) 08:59, 26 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]