Wikipedia:Peer review/Mathcounts/archive2

Mathcounts

• This is the second peer review of this article, and I believe it's improved quite a bit. What other improvements should I make before it's ready for WP:GA nomination? Nousernamesleft^{talk and matrix?} 19:29, 31 December 2007 (UTC)

Review by Phoenix-wiki (talk · contribs)

The lead section needs expansion. I think the "Subject matter" section should be merged into the lead, I don't think it deserves its own section and would significantly expand the lead section. The "Scholarships" section is way too short — that needs expansion. I think the "History" section can go completely, it says nothing that hasn't already been said. Move the "Timeline", "National champions" and "National Team winners" into a seperate article called create a seperate article called "Timeline of Mathcounts". That's about it, though more images could help. Hope that helps —Phoenix-wiki 20:06, 31 December 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for the suggestions, all you've suggested has been implemented. Well, I didn't expand the Scholarships section, but I added a tag to it and will expand it later. Nousernamesleft^{talk and matrix?} 20:36, 31 December 2007 (UTC)

Well, after you've expanded that, it should pass GA, I hope.--Phoenix-wiki 12:04, 2 January 2008 (UTC)

There! Do you think that's good enough? Nousernamesleft^{talk and matrix?} 18:53, 2 January 2008 (UTC)

I'll list this as archived now, but feel free to reply... Nousernamesleft^{talk and matrix?} 00:46, 3 January 2008 (UTC)