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I've listed this article for peer review because this article did not pass the GA criteria according to one reviewer. I think the article meets the Wikipedia:Good article criteria after an energetic effort to expand the article, complete with detailed Bibliography and in-line citations according to Wikipedia's Citation guidelines. There was only one reviewer for the article while the article was nominated, and he had suggested a restructuring of the article which I felt, would break the content flow of the article based on the new structure, but welcomed the reviewer to make edits accordingly if he/she so wishes. It was pretty disappointing as the reviewer was adamant about not making significant edits as the reviewer claimed "a conflict of interest", and the article ended up not promoted at all. I felt that insufficient attention was given to improve the article, and the reviewer seem to "wash up the case" with minimal effort. Feel free to read or go through Talk:Malaysia–Vietnam relations/GA1 for understanding or reference. My perception maybe wrong, too, and I am therefore listing Peer Review for this article. Reviewers are strong welcomed to make any modifications/edits to improve the article, as well as provide additional opinion if the article is suitable for GA status.
Thanks, Mr Tan (talk) 11:39, 9 November 2013 (UTC)
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