Wikipedia:Peer review/Loïc Le Meur/archive1
Some language in the article is very biased and/or is missing references. Maybe someone who is French or is living in France can contribute. --Heikoh 23:57, 18 March 2007 (UTC)
CloudNine
[edit]- First of all, there's no need to bold sentences in Controversies. It makes the article more awkward to read.
- Career needs expansion; there are several one line paragraphs.
- Could you possibly find a free image of the person? He is a public personality after all.
- Fix the citation needed or dubious tags, or remove the information altogether.
- EMEA may not be immediately obvious to readers; why not expand the acronym?
- How did Le Meur announce his support? You might want to add a translated comment.
- There's little about his personal life. Where was he born?
That should be enough for now :) CloudNine 18:06, 11 April 2007 (UTC)