Wikipedia:Peer review/List of universities in Alberta/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to receive suggestions on how to improve the article. Thanks! Gary King (talk) 00:23, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
- Mostly, same suggestions for expansion as the Manitoba list. The prose could use a little more copyediting here. Sentence structure comes across as a bit simple. DurovaCharge! 05:56, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
- I have copyedited it a bit further. I'll look around for some more information to add. Gary King (talk) 06:04, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
Comment from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)
The University of Calgary is the only university in the province located in Calgary, the province's most populated city.Dabomb87 (talk) 12:37, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
- Comment — Sources look good. –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 13:16, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
- Comment from SRX (talk · contribs) - Like you told me earlier, not FL quality yet, but I see no prose problems, but why not just write out "Established" and the other words versus "E".SRX 20:52, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
- Won't fit on a 1024x768 screen. Gary King (talk) 21:02, 24 October 2008 (UTC)