Wikipedia:Peer review/List of roller coaster rankings/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because… I wanna make sure everything is right in the article, this is only my second nomination.
Thanks, Astros4477 (talk) 22:26, 13 November 2012 (UTC)
Not sure "rankings" is an appropriate title, because it implies that there may be dynamic changes in position. A suggestion: "List of Roller Coaster Superlatives and Rankings". Note the capitalization, as well.Klantry01 (talk) 19:46, 19 November 2012 (UTC)
- Well there is. There are changes in each table almost every year. I think "rankings" is fine.--Astros4477 (talk) 22:02, 19 November 2012 (UTC)
Is that all for your comments?--Astros4477 (talk) 15:24, 23 November 2012 (UTC)
Comments: Overall pretty good, the list should be ready for featured list candidacy soon. Some specific comments:
- "This list of roller coaster rankings" WP:MOS is against this due to it being "boring", so I'd rewrite it or something
- Don't use words like "current" per WP:RELTIME
- WP:DASH concerns with "Magnum XL-200", hypten should be en-dash, please check
- Same goes for some references, like ref. 15
- "many" to "numerous" for a more engaging prose
- Add table captions to the tables, including the key, per WP:DTT
- Table doesn't meet WP:ACCESS, add scope cols and rows to ensure it does
- All the tables do have scope cols and rows.--Astros4477 (talk) 02:11, 27 November 2012 (UTC)
- Remove the "." dots after numbers in tables, as it is unnecessary
- Unlink all countries per WP:OVERLINK, as done in the tables
- "USA" to "United States" for better prose
- "Record Held" held should not be in capitals per MOS:CAPS
- Would suggest creating a "Ref." section in table, and adding the references that are just after the tables in there, some do already have that, but others don't, so add to all, and please check
- Just a suggestion, but aligning references in the tables that do have them right now to the center would probably be a good idea
- Some have no references in "Ref." header parameter, ones that do right now have it
- "Poll rankings" tables certainly don't meet WP:ACCESS, "Top 10 Steel Roller Coasters of 2012" and such should be as a table caption per WP:DTT
- Add related portals to the see also section with {{portal box}}, see WP:PORTAL, or add to the end of article using {{portal bar}} after the templates
- Any external links?
- In there, I would add a {{Commons}} template