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List of characters in South Park

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I've listed this article because I was wondering what it needs to be ready for FAC. I was wondering especially about leaving the list as a table, or if it is really necessary to switch it into paragraphs as some people suggested at the previous FAC.

Thanks, Nergaal (talk) 05:58, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Sandman888
First it's FLC, not FAC.
I think tables works fine, but perhaps paragraphs wd give it a more prose-like feel.
the role column doesn't seem to be referenced, neither is the first appearance. Suggest re-write using references and give me a nudge and I'll look over the prose.

Creation and inception

"with an original idea" remove original
"Merchandise" and the subsequent section doesn't belong in this list, but in the South Park main article.
- - These two were requested during the previous FLC, with the reason that other character-list FLs have these two. Nergaal (talk) 23:37, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
    - Far too often the FLC process is based on an appeal to authority blindness rather than looking at the article and wonder whether it is truly necessary. Sandman888 (talk) ^{Latest PR} 14:51, 25 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- That's a preliminary review, but I suspect the prose to change when references are used. Sandman888 (talk) ^{Latest PR} 13:14, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]