Wikipedia:Peer review/List of UEFA Cup Winners' Cup champions/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I feel that it is close to being FL standard, and I hope that the peer review process will iron out any kinks in the list. Thanks, NapHit (talk) 16:36, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
Major coment
- Lead needs exspanding.
Minor comments
- Merge the year cells for the finals that went to replays.
- This seems to be more a list of UEFA Cup Winners' Cup finals.
Buc (talk) 17:26, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
Ruhrfisch comments: I agree with all of Buc's comments. Very briefly, here are some suggestions for improvement. If you want more comments, please ask here.
- Since the cup is no longer awarded, make sure the tense is consistent (and past). For example, the caption should be something like "The UEFA Cup Winners' Cup which the champion received from 1961 to 1999."
- The tables in the Most Successful teams and Champions by country sections have no references.
- The notes are inconsistently placed - R is in with year, the other notes are in with score, and the note "a" on Valencia in 1980 is in the Notes column. They should be in the same place (probably score column).
- Is Rec.Sport.Soccer Statistics Foundation a [[WP:RS|reliable source]? WHy not use the External link from UEFA as a ref?
Hope this helps. If my comments are useful, please consider peer reviewing an article, especially one at Wikipedia:Peer review/backlog (which is how I found this article). Yours, Ruhrfisch ><>°° 02:29, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
Comments by Rambo's Revnge
- Were the three replays played at the same location, I suggest clarifying this or noting replay venues if different.
- "winning the competition four times until it was abolished" I think "before it was abolished" would be better, however I think you could end the sentence at "four times" as you mention that the competition ended for good two sentences before.
- I'd possible suggest sorting locations by counrty first e.g. Barcelona, Spain given by {{sort|Spain, Barcelona|[[Barcelona]], [[Spain]]}}
- I'd distinguish using West Germany using where appropriate
FRG
Generally it looks good though. Rambo's Revenge (talk) 07:12, 8 August 2008 (UTC)