Wikipedia:Peer review/Leonard Cohen/archive1

I'd like to get this artice up to featured article status.

Get a freely-licensed image! Try fan forums and email lists. See Wikipedia:Boilerplate requests for permission for ideas on how to ask for images from fan websites. Good luck. Jkelly 04:44, 16 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Let's see...

~~There's a bit of info in the biography that could be moved out into other sections: the part that discusses some songs in detail, and the "family life" section, which doesn't fit chronologically.~~
The extensive thematic analysis could certainly use some references — surely enough professionally-written reviews and essays can be found on someone like him, especially in print? Also, it's primarily an analysis of his songs — what about the other material? And if you're going to analyze the songs, why not go into the music in more detail as well? (Instrumentation, style, composition...)
In fact, create an actual list of references per style.
Long lists are generally not a good idea on Wikipedia. Particularly, Wikipedia is not a repository of lists of quotations. If the quote is relevant, use it to back up other text; otherwise take it away to his Wikiquote page.
Don't link to a word in the middle of a song title; expand on the info outside of the quotation marks.
Try not to phrase parenthetical asides with words like "note".
~~Clip down the external links a bit; individual YouTube clips can go. For articles containing useful information, use them as references and include them that way.~~

Thanks for the replies. I'll get to work on this over the weekend. -- Funky Monkey (talk) 12:06, 21 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 15:40, 21 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]