Wikipedia:Peer review/Lancashire/archive1

This article could be improved; if it were, I hope we can make it a WP:FAC candidate. Please leave feedback here. --TheM62Manchester 11:33, 3 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Some comments: For a regional page it's a tad on the short side. The only section that's significantly developed is "environs and divisions". The "cuisine" and "places of interest" sections are just lists. I'd rather see something more descriptive. The page doesn't yet meet the citeria for high-quality articles that have already undergone extensive work that is mentioned at the top of this page. It's a decent start, but I'd like to see 2-3 times as much good material, along with citations and references. Thanks! — RJH (talk) 15:42, 3 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 01:28, 9 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]