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Kroger Babb

Looking for any help or pointers available. Thanks! --badlydrawnjeff talk 21:57, 30 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Few things: 1)The section about Mom and Dad never actual explains what the movie is about. The section would not make sense to someone who has never seen the film. 2)The lead is fairly short. Does it summarise the entire article? 3)Is the lead photo really a promo photo? That is a fine specification. --198.185.18.207 21:51, 2 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

1) I should probably spend some time fleshing out the Mom and Dad article a bit, too, now that you mention it. A paragraph expansion would be very useful, though, you're absolutely right. 2) I'm horrid at leads, I admit. Any help here would be great. 3) It is indeed a promotional photo, it went out with his promotional materials for his flicks. --badlydrawnjeff talk 23:00, 2 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]