Wikipedia:Peer review/Jordin Sparks discography/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to nominate it for FL. Any feedback and suggestions would be great! Thanks, Oz talk 22:09, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
Comments
- No mention of soundtrack appearances in the lead.
Done - " and earned her a record deal " no need for "her" or replace "and" with "which". Done
- "was then released in" no need for "then". Done
- Link "certified" to Music recording sales certification. Done
- "As of November 2010," nearly March 2012, any update?
I'll try searching for more recent sales. Oz talk 03:26, 25 February 2012 (UTC)- Update: I could not find any recent updates on the album's sales. Oz talk 05:12, 5 March 2012 (UTC)
- "as of December 2010" ditto.
Otherwise, look forward to seeing it at FLC. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:50, 24 February 2012 (UTC)
Comments from Michael Jester
- Overall, an excellent article. Great work so far. I hope to see it in FLC soon. Anyway,
- Some references (the Hung Medien-related ones) have lower case letters in the work parameter (e.g. australian-charts.com). While I don't particularly care too, too much about this, some users can be picky. Done
- Ref #14: According to Template:Cite news, a person should not be put as a publisher. Done
- Ref #38: Use {{-'}} to turn "' into "' Done