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John Smith (miller)

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I've listed this article for peer review because it is a new article about an important figure in Rhode Island history.

Thanks, Diogenes99 (talk) 19:01, 22 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

Some comments after a quick skim:

Avoid block quotes when you can. Instead, summarise the information.
Per WP:EL, external links should not be placed in the article body.
Keep looking for additional sources to add information to the article. I recommend WP:LIBRARY, Google Scholar, Google Books, or your local library system (which might give access to online databases.)

I hope this helps! Z1720 (talk) 19:17, 2 October 2022 (UTC) @Diogenes99: To ensure that they saw the above comments. Z1720 (talk) 03:03, 15 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

It has been over two weeks since the last ping without a response, so I am going to close this PR. A new one can be opened when the above are considered for the article. Z1720 (talk) 22:57, 2 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]