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John Marshall Harlan II

I've been working on this for a while and would like to check if anyone has any suggestions/comments. -- Emsworth 20:01, 19 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

An excellent article. There were only a few minor editing nits, such as a couple of extra commas where they weren't needed. You might mention that he spent much of his youth living in Canada.[1] Also he was the eighth Princeton graduate to serve on the Supreme Court.[2] It could also use a line or two about his activities with the New York State Crime Commission, where he "helped investigate waterfront rackets in New York City and illegal gambling activities in several other communities", &c. (In the process possibly explaining why he was selected for the Court of Appeals???) Thanks. :) — RJH 17:24, 21 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]