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Hurricane Danny (1997)

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This is already a good article, and has been one since August of this year. I and 3 other users have edited it since than, and I would like to know some feedback to further improve the article. I, or someone if they wish before me, am considering making the article a featured candidate fairly soon. Hello32020 21:34, 28 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Lots of random things.

  1. Find a better infobox pic, maybe one later in the article
  2. Find a damage pic. There might not be any PD ones, though you could still try and email people to get one.
  3. Longer lede.
  4. Any more storm history? More explaination would be nice.
  5. More impact. It should be organized with one paragraph of meteorological details, then successive paragraphs on state by state impact. NCDC reports would most likely help in the state by state coverage. Also, did the tornadoes cause any damage?
  6. Any aftermath?
  7. Records should either be expanded or merged with another topic.
  8. More research in general. There are only 6 references. Other WPTC FA's generally have many more than that.

Hurricanehink (talk) 21:45, 28 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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