Wikipedia:Peer review/Humayun/archive1

Humayun

I have expanded this article a fair bit, but I not sure that it reads well, or would make to to become a GA. I would like help here! - Irishpunktom\^talk 15:43, 7 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Good article. I would definitely recommend adding citations throughout the body of the article, so that it's clear where various pieces of information came from. Also, some of the articles reads more like a legend, or a fictionalized truth. In those instances, you could say 'accroding to XYZ, ..." to make the article appear more encyclopedic.

Good luck!

--CommonGround 19:51, 7 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Like, inline citations? - I'm still not how to do them, but, I shall try! thanks. --Irishpunktom\^talk 10:52, 12 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Surprisingly good article. All credit must go to User: Irishpunktom. Congrats!!

Sisodia 06:12, 22 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]