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This went through GA, bt was passed without a review. I'm going to be taking this article to FAC soon, and any feedback on the article would be welcome. Particularly in the prose area, and also if there are any sections missing about the team that needed to be added.

Noble Story (talk • contributions) 01:46, 7 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

This article should modeled after the only NBA team FA Toronto Raptors as close as possible. If possible, add sections about uniforms, fanbase, community service, broadcasters.—Chris! _ct 03:12, 7 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Actually, personally I don't think that broadcasters are really relevant to the franchise (also, there are no references for them anyway). And I do think that their fanbase is mostly covered in "Home arenas" section. Noble Story (talk • contributions) 03:17, 7 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Also it lacks images—Chris! _ct 03:20, 7 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Indeed. I'm working on it. Noble Story (talk • contributions) 03:25, 7 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Ealdgyth (talk · contribs)

You said you wanted to know what to work on before taking to FAC, so I looked at the sourcing and referencing with that in mind. I reviewed the article's sources as I would at FAC.
Newspapers titles in the references should be in italics. If you're using {{cite news}}, use the work field for the title of the paper, and the publisher field for the name of the actual company that publishes the paper. Same applies to magazines
Current ref 60 (Asin) is lacking a publisher
Per the MOS, link titles in the references shouldn't be in all capitals, even when they are in the original

Hope this helps. Please note that I don't watchlist Peer Reviews I've done. If you have a question about something, you'll have to drop a note on my talk page to get my attention. (My watchlist is already WAY too long, adding peer reviews would make things much worse.) 21:58, 7 March 2009 (UTC)