Wikipedia:Peer review/Gojira (band)/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to make it a Featured Article. It is already a GA and I would like to know if it passes the Wikipedia:Featured article criteria. And if not, I would like to know how to improve it. Thanks. Cheers. LYKANTROP 13:33, 4 May 2008 (UTC)
- Laser brain's comments
- You have a great start here, but I wouldn't consider this anywhere near comprehensive enough for FA status. Take a look at some other FAs on musical groups, like Powderfinger or Red Hot Chili Peppers to get an idea of the depth required. More research and more writing is needed.
- The lead is far too short, but I suspect it will grow as the article grows.
- The prose is pretty good as it stands; just need to expand it. :) --Laser brain (talk) 16:40, 6 May 2008 (UTC)