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George Calvert, 1st Baron Baltimore

Massive expansion of the article. Needs general review, suggestions for/comments on referencing, any sharp eye for grammar or spelling errors, and especially suggestions as to improving the prose. I'm trying to work it up to FA. So yeah, any suggestions welcome. Mocko13 04:59, 11 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

You need an infobox, pick one from WP:WPBIO. The lead neeeds expanding, and can you get an ISBN for the two other books? Persondata would be useful at the bottom too, see WP:PDATA. British spelling? I can see he's Irish, but I think it would make more sense than American English. The image source (http://www.heritage.nf.ca/avalon/history/george_calvert.html) says reproduced with permission of <someone> - can you clarify that its been released into the public domain? Other than that, I think you're doing pretty well. RHB ^{Talk - Edits} 14:03, 11 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Added infobox (although I don't think you meant to send me to wikiproject:beer, right?), added Persondata, changed image to one whose provenance and copyright I can be sure of. Will work on lead. I don't think the other two sources have ISBN's, since they're so old (but I could be wrong). You may be right about British spelling, but I'll need to find a Brit to go over it. Thanks for the input. Mocko13 14:59, 11 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I'd be happy to run over and check for spelling consistency, just let me know whenever you're finished. You're right about the books, should've looked at the dates, and I've corrected the link to WikiProject Biography. RHB ^{Talk - Edits} 16:25, 11 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 21:52, 12 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]